“She wrote to him fairly regularly, from a paradise of triple exclamation points and inaccurate observations.”
“Cut out all these exclamation points. An exclamation point is like laughing at your own joke.”
“Never trust an exclamation point.”
“Her view of men was one-dimensional, but not inaccurate: men were prisoners of their genitalia and women were the keepers of the keys to paradise.”
“It isn’t fair, but maybe that’s the whole point. Fairness has no part in real life, and she took that lesson away from the Hotel Angeline with her.”
“Use lots of exclamation points. They love to be overused.”